Julia J

Oh god, why dose my head feel like it was beaten in with a bat? I thought as I opened my eyes to the dimly lit living room. I suppose ...

Nice piece just a few things I noticed: We, sons of the soil would no longer carry on in our cold homes thinking the sky's the limit. No, we would ...

What you typed here is rather skeletal and could definately afford a whole lot more description. In general there are punctuation and just little lowercase/uppercase mistakes. Just a few mistakes ...